SAT寫作時(shí)間為25分鐘，要求就作文命題中的一對對立論點(diǎn)闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，無字?jǐn)?shù)限制。廣州環(huán)球教育為大家整理了一篇SAT寫作范文，這篇獲得高分的SAT寫作考試范文的主要是關(guān)于池塘的，大家可以在備考自己的SAT寫作考試的時(shí)候根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)臏?zhǔn)備和借鑒，以下就是關(guān)于池塘的SAT作文范文。 　　Our backyard is large, with around ten oak, elm, and willow trees: trunks the diameter of sizable bowls （too vague） . A zigzag path leads visitors into the wilderness of our backyard, in which is a large fish pond. ? 　　When we first moved here, however, the backyard was nowhere near as neat. ? 　　We couldn't even walk through the rampant weeds and grasses that thrived. Using his time off on weekends, Dad worked at it for a few months, using simple hand tools, cement, and a few tons of limestone to build a magnificent rockery, stone fountain, and fish pond. We released into it several beautiful carp; wherever they swam there would be a flash of scintillating red. Dad bought a considerable amount of marine grasses to add more life to our backyard. Afterwards, whenever we caught a fish we'd drop it into our pond, including catfish and a few small species, and once even a fat turtle. ? 　　Ever since the pond had fish, ?“guests” became attracted to it. The neighbor's fat black cat came nearly every day. It would sit on the stones, completely frozen, staring fixedly at our fish. It would occasionally swipe its paw in the air, as if wanting to call the fish to the shore. Sometimes it would slowly walk about the pond bank, stop,continue… perhaps it had its eye on a particular fish. I've never observed that cat ever harming one of our specimens, but it doesn't really need to; one can easily see from the cat's fat tummy that it doesn't lack nourishment. Maybe it's just evolution: a cat's need to catch fish as a biological fact may be proven in our backyard. ? 　　Another guest, a large bird, perhaps a hawk or vulture, constantly circles the air above the pond. As soon as it pinpointed a target, it would dive downward, lightning fast, splicing the water and drawing up a small fish. Dad later put thick marine vegetation in, giving the fish cover and the bird a hard time to catch its prey. ? 　　There are more worries to a fish in our pond other than birds and cats. There are plump, thin-haired raccoons that stroll about, frequently rummaging through our trash. Their fur is glossy; one glance can tell you that they are well-trained thieves at getting what they want. For a time Mom was really angry with them because they'd destroy the neatness of the separated bags that she carefully put into the trashcan. At nine every night, she'd flick on the backyard lights, freezing suddenly the raccoon and its hairless, pouched possum buddy. Seeing the eye-glaring porch lamp, they'd then immediately retreat, swaying their portly bellies reluctantly away from a potential meal. One night, as Mom turned on the porch light, we heard a splash from the pond. We opened the door and went into the backyard, curious. That splash was caused by a big raccoon, madly paddling in the water trying to grab fish. Its fur was completely drenched, sticking to its sides; it seemed the only thing that could make the scene better was a fish net. Later, Dad consulted an encyclopedia, which confirmed that these creatures liked to swipe small fish. No wonder their fur was so glossy; they were very well fed. ? 　　The life of a fish in our backyard pond is full of risks. Fish require much strength; as they learn to battle with their natural enemies, they learn to defend themselves. Each and every one of the fish in our backyard leads a robust and heroic life. ? 　　以上就是關(guān)于池塘的SAT作文范文，廣州環(huán)球教育邀您一起來看看關(guān)于本篇文章考官的評價(jià)吧。 ? 　　Comments：An uplifting and delightful story. An excellent example of imagery, as my visual perception is so transparent because of his detailed de锝擄絻锝掞綁锝愶綌ion. One just has to feel sorry for the fish, as they hurry and scurry in the water away from their furry predators. Excellent! ? 　　評語：這是一篇扣人心弦、令人愉悅的故事，也是一篇充滿形象描述的佳作。作者通過細(xì)致的描寫，向讀者展現(xiàn)了一幅栩栩如生的畫面。讀者不由得替魚兒們感到揪心，因?yàn)轸~兒們總在水中急急地游動(dòng)，以躲避各種天敵！寫得很出色！ ? 　　廣州環(huán)球教育也為大家準(zhǔn)備了關(guān)于池塘的SAT作文范文的翻譯，幫助大家更好的理解吸收，希望大家取長補(bǔ)短，更輕松的攻克SAT寫作。 ? 　　我們家的后院很大，里面有十來棵碗口粗的橡樹、榆樹和柳樹。一條彎彎曲曲的小徑將客人帶向后院中荒蕪的一角，那里有一個(gè)大魚池。 ? 　　然而，當(dāng)我們初搬來這里的時(shí)候，后院沒有一個(gè)地方像現(xiàn)在這么整潔。那里原來雜草叢生，我們根本無法穿行。爸爸利用周末的空余時(shí)間，在那里勞動(dòng)了幾個(gè)月。他用簡易的工具、水泥和幾噸石灰石建起了很棒的假山、石頭噴泉和魚池。我們往魚池里放進(jìn)了幾條漂亮的鯉魚；它們游到哪里，哪里便出現(xiàn)點(diǎn)點(diǎn)閃爍的紅色。爸爸又買來不少水草，給魚池增添了更多的生機(jī)。自此以后，無論什么時(shí)候我們捉到了魚，都會(huì)將它放進(jìn)我們的池中，這其中包括鯰魚和一些不*的小魚，有一次甚至還放進(jìn)去了一只肥肥的甲魚。 ? 　　自從池子里有了魚之后，“客人們”便被吸引而至。鄰居那只又肥又大的黑貓幾乎天天光臨。它常坐在石頭上，一動(dòng)也不動(dòng)，目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯著池里的魚。它偶爾會(huì)在空中揮動(dòng)一下爪子，似乎要招呼魚兒到岸邊來。有時(shí)，它會(huì)沿著池邊慢慢地行走，走走停?！苍S它盯上了某條魚。我從未看到過那只黑貓得手，不過它也并不需要得手；從它肥胖的肚子很容易看出它并不缺乏營養(yǎng)。也許這只是表明了進(jìn)化論：貓要捉魚的生物學(xué)行為可以在我們的后院里得到證明。 ? 　　另外一位客人是一只大鳥，也許是鷹或禿鷲。它常在魚池的上空盤旋，一旦找準(zhǔn)目標(biāo)，便會(huì)俯沖下來，快如閃電般插入水中，叼起一條小魚。爸爸后來往池中放進(jìn)了厚厚的水草，將魚兒遮蔽起來，使得這位客人很難得手。 ? 　　除了提防鳥類和貓之外，我們池中的魚兒們還得擔(dān)心其他的偷襲。有一種胖嘟嘟、身上長著細(xì)毛的浣熊四處溜達(dá)，經(jīng)常在我們的垃圾箱里翻找殘食。它們的毛皮十分光滑，一看就知道是訓(xùn)練有素的小偷，總能得到它們想要的東西。有一陣，媽媽真的對它們很生氣，因?yàn)樗鼈儗⑺胚M(jìn)垃圾箱里細(xì)細(xì)分類的垃圾袋弄得一塌糊涂。于是每晚九點(diǎn)鐘的時(shí)候，她便猛地打開后院的燈，強(qiáng)光會(huì)讓浣熊和它全身無毛、腹部有袋的負(fù)鼠伙伴怔在那里?？吹酱萄鄣淖呃葻艄猓鼈儽悴磺樵傅?fù)u晃著肥胖的肚子，撇下一頓快到手的大餐，立即撤退。 ? 　　有一天晚上，當(dāng)媽媽將走廊上的燈打開的時(shí)候，我們聽見從池塘里傳來濺水聲。我們好奇地打開門，走到了后院。原來濺水聲來自一只大浣熊，它正瘋狂地拍打著水面，試圖抓住魚兒。它的皮毛完全濕透了，粘在身上，就差拿一只漁網(wǎng)在那里捕魚了。后來，爸爸查了百科全書，發(fā)現(xiàn)這些動(dòng)物喜歡捉小魚。怪不得它們的皮毛這么油光水滑，原來它們吃得好著呢。 ? 　　我們后院池塘里的魚兒生活在險(xiǎn)境之中，需要變得很強(qiáng)壯。在它們學(xué)習(xí)與天敵搏斗的過程中，也學(xué)會(huì)了如何保護(hù)自己，所以我家的每條魚兒都生龍活虎、生機(jī)勃勃。 ? 　　以上就是關(guān)于池塘的SAT作文范文的翻譯，廣州環(huán)球教育小編提醒您SAT寫作考試的時(shí)間短，但是要求卻很嚴(yán)，大家在備考SAT寫作考試的時(shí)候，大家可以根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況，對范文的語言應(yīng)用和例子的選擇進(jìn)行不同程度的準(zhǔn)備，以便豐富自己的備考內(nèi)容，對考試有更加全面的應(yīng)對。 ?