以下為大家列出托福寫作中需要提防的10個(gè)常見錯(cuò)誤，大家在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中也要多多注意這些錯(cuò)誤。
 
1.用詞不當(dāng)
 
  學(xué)生們寫的作文里或多或少都會有一些用詞不當(dāng)?shù)膯栴}，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯(cuò)誤是不能犯的。
 
• In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand . dollars as a prize.
 
——problems應(yīng)改為uestions
 
2.拼寫錯(cuò)誤
 
這里的拼寫錯(cuò)誤不是指在考試時(shí)候的誤打，而是本身對詞匯拼寫記憶的錯(cuò)誤。
 
• In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, reuiring subjective judgement, conseuently, there are no easy or certain answers.
 
——judgement應(yīng)改為judgment
 
3.亂用大詞
 
First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn&rsuo;t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
 
這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問題:
 
1)該作文題目是講學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做兼職，因此children的出現(xiàn)就顯得很莫名其妙;
 
2)although和but是不能連用的;
 
3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;
 
4.表達(dá)中式
 
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is uite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.
 
句子中劃線部分的表達(dá)過于中式化。
 
5.表意重復(fù)
 
•They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
 
前面已經(jīng)提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
 
• The show is so compelling but attractive.
 
•compelling和attractive是同義詞，所以這里這么寫就讓人不明白。
 
6.固定用法錯(cuò)誤
 
• To some extends, I agree with the author&rsuo;s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
 
——To some extends應(yīng)改為To some extent
 
7.例證夸張
 
• For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient&rsuo;s immediate death.
 
雖然善意的謊言是必要的，但是其功效顯然沒有這么大。
 
8.成分多余
 
• According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.
 
該句中的shows that是多余的成分。
 
9.詞性混亂
 
• However, the uestions such as &uot;Have you ever regretted marrying your husband&uot; may be very privacy and embarrassingly.
 
句子中的privacy和embarrassingly應(yīng)該改成private和embarrassing。
 
10.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤
 
托福大作文一般使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，除了拿過去事件作為例子用過去時(shí)態(tài)。
 
• Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.
 
—— claimed應(yīng)該改為claim

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