許多學(xué)生認(rèn)為,雅思英語寫作應(yīng)該使用比較復(fù)雜的句型,例如定語從句、主語從句、倒裝句、獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)......
然而,事實(shí)真的如此嗎?
下面是從一篇雅思9.0分范文中挑選出來的一段話。采用的句型結(jié)構(gòu)分析如下:
There are several advantages to using computers in education. (簡單句)Firstly, students learn new skills which will be extremely(=very) useful for their future jobs. (定語從句)For example, they learn to write reports or other documents(文件) using a word processor(文字處理器), AND they can practise doing spoken presentations using PowerPoint slides. (and并列句)Secondly, technology is a powerful tool to engage students(吸引學(xué)生). (簡單句)The use of websites or online videos can make lessons much more interesting, AND many students are more motivated to do homework or research using online resources. (and并列句)Finally, if each student has a computer to work on, they can study at their own pace.(條件句)這樣一篇滿分作文段落,總共6句話,包含:
2個簡單句2個由and連接的并列句1個簡單的定語從句1個簡單的if條件句相信,這樣的句型,絕大部分學(xué)生都能輕輕松松的完成。
大膽放心地寫1-2句簡單句。使用and撰寫并列句。復(fù)雜句不等于從句,而是在于句中包含的語義是否足夠豐富。而這些豐富的語義,可以使用簡單的and連接,也可以使用簡單的if連接。關(guān)鍵在于,用的合乎邏輯。當(dāng)然,一個好的段落,還需要好的話題詞匯來襯托。在上面的段落中,就有很多這樣的詞匯或短語:
be extremely useful for their future jobs 對今后的工作有很大的幫助write reports or other documents using a word processor 使用文字處理器寫報(bào)告或文件practise doing spoken presentations using PowerPoint slides使用PPT進(jìn)行口頭演講展示a powerful tool to engage students 吸引學(xué)生的有力工具are more motivated to do homework or research 更有動力做家庭作業(yè)或研究study at their own pace